martes, 8 de junio de 2010

Storie: The limit of your scary

The limit of your scary

Once upon a time, three boys lived in Kentuky. There they wasted timed having fun in any place they could.

On November first, Christian, Peter and Lucas were telling ghost stories front of a campfire, when suddenly they heard a loud noise wow...wow...wow. It was shocking noise.

Christian said "What was that?" " I don't like this place" exclaimed Lucas


Then Peter said run Lucas, run Christian!

"I want to go home" exclaimed Christian

All running quickly, but they stop them. They saw something terrific... a creature

The creature smiled at them while they were running in fear.

1 comentario:

  1. The creature smiled at them while they were running in fear.

    But they stopped.

    Victor,
    Nice job using the changes from class. Your story looks really nice with the images added.

    I enjoyed the story a lot. I think it's really good.

    See you tomorrow :)

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